Talk:Mike Inez/Comments

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This article appears to be about a respectably valid topic. However, it does come accross as biassed in favor of the subject. The article could be cleaned up to appear more third-person. Much of the article appears to be in praise of the subject. Example: "In 1990, more than 50 musicians were auditioning for Ozzy Osbourne's group, and Inez won the spot of bassist. Within a month, Inez was playing live at a gig with Osbourne at Wembley Stadium" Could be read: "He began his career in 1990, when he joined Ozzy Osboure's group by winning an audition of over 50 musicians and was performing live with the band soon thereafter."