User talk:Mhardee

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[edit] Re: Advice on Design comics entry?

Hi Owen, I have tried to remove the "ad-ness" from the design comics entry; it's not intended as an advertisement and this is a recognized design descipline used by YAHOO, HP, Symantec, Sun, Cisco and other companies. Do you have advice on better ways to write it? (I have read the guidelines but maybe I am not getting something.) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mhardee (talk • contribs) 17:57, August 25, 2007 (UTC)

As it is right now, the Design comics article is more promotional than informational. I'm sure all the facts are true, but the tone isn't suitable for an encyclopedia. Please check other articles to get an idea of a proper tone and style for this article. Check Haptic or Office Assistant for some good examples. Owen× ☎ 18:09, 25 August 2007 (UTC)