Talk:Mein Kampf/Comments

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Reading through the first part of this article there are several things which I feel could be changed in it. First of all it is written in quite informal English, certain aspects could do with being altered to make it more formal. The 2nd point that I wish to highlight is the lack of citations or references in the first section. There are several quotes and attributions which have not been referenced, this could do with being updated. Thanks.

Joe (talk) 21:05, 15 April 2008 (UTC)