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[edit] Reads like an AD

This reads like a Advertisement. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.103.34.250 (talk) 16:47, 4 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] POV complaint

This page is copied verbatim from [1]. According to the information at Image:Marvell_logo.gif the author works for Marvell so it probably isn't a copyvio. However virtually every sentence praises the company and the last sentence is "With a clear commitment to both innovation and our partnerships, Marvell is rapidly moving toward a vision of the completely integrated digital lifestyle.". -- mattrix 19:41, 24 May 2006 (UTC)

My apologies, I am still unfamilar with this medium and was unaware of the potential issues. The content has been toned down, and is more inline with other company profiles here. If you have any additional concerns let's discuss and I will make the appropriate changes. If everything is ok I'd like to close this issue and remove any comment. Appreciate your time. -- dwilsonmrvl 13:35, 24 May 2006 (PDT)

No worries. I've removed some more marketing-sounding stuff and I'm now happy enough now to remove the POV tag. However the article is now a bit short. If you want, you could add more information about factual matters such as the companies history, structure etc. (By the way -- it looks like you typed the signature bit yourself, you can just use four tidles (~~~~) and Wikipedia will do it for you.) -- mattrix 14:14, 25 May 2006 (UTC)

Will do, thanks again for your time Dwilsonmrvl 16:57, 26 May 2006 (UTC)