Talk:Mark DeSaulnier

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[edit] Removal of background information

I removed the following line: "His father, a judge, committed suicide after being accused of corruption and battling a gambling addiction [1]." This current piece of imformation, as the page is currently formated, fits awkwardly in the section. If more background information is found, this sentence should be added.

[edit] Controversial Policies

Hey! I cited the very articles of legislation that were not only partisan but seriously misguided. I provided links to the State website which clearly states the facts included in the proposed legislation, not to mention copies of the bills themselves. What is up with the censor? From the note that was sent me I only did what was encouraged by wiki policy (unless it is clearly the point of view of a non-liberal on wikipedia as has been so clearly demonstrated in this act of removal) I did not make those additions lightly, and they took me a fair amount of time to source. AB 2235 is over the top was critiqued by the NRA-ILA and I referenced that and AB 1617 was unconstitutional and VETOED by the governor, thats a pretty damn powerful critique which was referenced. My careful critique and facts were erased and I am not happy about it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Skipingrock (talkcontribs) 20:26, 28 April 2008 (UTC)