Talk:Make Me Smile (Come Up and See Me)

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[edit] Not neutral

This article reads like music criticism, not an encylopedia. Opinions are stated in the voice of the article, not attributed to critics (there are no references!). The prime example:

Some people have previously commented that musically the song seems to be strongly influenced by Roxy Music; however, the Harley song possesses an irresistible hook line and quality of production rarely seen in a Bryan Ferry song. In a television interview recorded in 2002, Steve Harley described how the lyrics are vindictively directed at the former band members, whom he felt had abandoned him - a fact which eludes a majority of listeners who enjoy the apparently happy chorus.

--Melty girl 06:16, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

I have removed the personal opinions and removed the POV tag. JMcC (talk) 14:05, 27 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Erasure single MMS.jpg

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BetacommandBot (talk) 06:12, 2 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:MakeMeS.jpg

Image:MakeMeS.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.

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BetacommandBot (talk) 16:26, 8 March 2008 (UTC)