Talk:Lynn University
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[edit] Style
Now it's sounding like a brochure. Needs to be more encyclopedia-like.Bjones 01:35, 23 November 2005 (UTC)
- I removed it all. A lot of it, at least, was a copyvio from [1]. To the poster: please rewrite the article in your own words, don't borrow text from the university website. And keep a neutral tone. u p p l a n d 06:07, 23 November 2005 (UTC)
[edit] this article needs to be changed
this is not an objective article at all. i.e. the campus is beautiful, etc.
- Agreed. I didn't even see the nuetrality dispute template. I started reading and that was the first mistake I saw...--Eddie 23:06, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Style Correction
I made an attempt to correct the style and have begun adding information. Additional feedback on content, technique and style are appreciated. ABosio 21:59, 2 November 2006 (UTC)
This article has been flagged for "advertisement". I would like to correct any problems with this article. You can see I made an earlier revision to remove statements contributing to a biased tone. I would appreciate any help or pointers to further improve it so that it is not deleted. ABosio 13:58, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
