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Assignment #1 110-001 UWM
Produtive s/b productive
Somthing s/b something
I started with a misspelled word "produtive/productive" and realized the first sentence can be stated more clearly.
Explain jargon when you use it to help the reader understand the terminology (see jargon). Remember that the person reading your article might not be someone educated or versed in your field, and so might not understand the subject-specific terms from that field. Terms which may go without a definition in an academic paper or a textbook may require one in Wikipedia.
The first time an article uses a term that may not be clearly understood by a reader, such as the terminology of a science, art, philosophy, etc., or the jargon of a particular trade or profession, introduce it with a short, clear explanation and perhaps based on terms previously defined in the article. Beware of inaccuracies accompanying short explanations of technical terms with precise meanings.
Be sure to make use of the Wiki format and link the term if there is a relevant article.
Corrected two misspelled words and simplified the explanation.
Fibromyalgia (FM) is a disorder classified by the presence of chronic widespread pain and tactile allodynia – An example of allodynia is when a person perceives light pressure or the movement of clothes over the skin as painful, whereas a healthy individual will not feel pain.mapl.[1] Fibromyalgia patients are often affected by a number of symptoms other than pain, including debilitating fatigue, abnormal sleep architecture,[2] functional bowel disturbances[3]
