Talk:Lois Brown

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[edit] POV issues

This article reads like a bio on Brown's campaign web page. Also the article is unsourced, so far all I know that's where most of the text came from. The whole thing needs to be reworked in a major way (probably including simply deleting a lot of the extraneous, promotional stuff like "Lois loves to jump in and give a hand at as many community and charity events as she can - whether it’s flipping burgers, manning a station or cleaning up." Great! We don't care.). Probably someone with at least a little knowledge of Canadian politics would be a good candidate for making this article NPOV.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 22:03, 11 April 2007 (UTC)