Talk:Lightning Seeds
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[edit] POV TAG
I've just added a POV tag to the article - bits of it read as if they're written by a fan (which I expect they are!). Unsourced comments like "most popular and enterprising" and "critical success" are pretty much all the way through the article, and phrases like "Completely demolishing" and "sadly failed to set the charts alight" don't exactly seem POV. I'll take a bash at sourcing it and shifting it to a more NPOV but if anyone who worked on it has a moment they can probably do a better job than me. Fysidiko 13:15, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Sourcing
Reading through my previous comment I realised the article is in need of sourcing too. As per my previous remarks, if no one else has done it within a day or two I'll have the time to have a go at it. Fysidiko 13:15, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Other members
This is a very confusing read. "After Rogers parted from Broudie..." Who is "Rogers"? When did the other members of the band join? Could sombody who knows the chronology please have a go at this? 172.129.237.176 20:24, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

