Talk:LIFECYCLE Fundraising

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[edit] References

Will be / are being redone something like properly over the next day or two. Bear with me. KeithDunnett 04:17, 20 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] NPOV tag

Let me review the article and see if I can come up with some more constructive advice for you. Just finished up cleaning up some vandalism from my user talk space. KC9CQJ 18:23, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

• Drop the trademark in the title. Is the company Lifecycle or LIFECYCLE?
  • The company name is capitalised; this is not an error. KeithDunnett 23:04, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
• Any instance of our should be switched to their or something of the like. Write from an article standpoint, not a public information standpoint. This is the main reason that I tagged the article NPOV in the first place.
  • Fair enough - user is suitably LARTed. Page has been reworded accordingly. KeithDunnett 23:04, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
• Drop the About the...section and use it to lead the article. That's all I see for now.
  • No objection, and thanks for the input. KeithDunnett 23:05, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

KC9CQJ 19:23, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

Am leaving the page in edit mode for a day or two as I haven't quite finished yet, but hopefully the revised version addresses most of the above concerns. KeithDunnett 23:04, 19 May 2006 (UTC)