Talk:Lewis Turco
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[edit] Biography assessment rating comment
WikiProject Biography Summer 2007 Assessment Drive
The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Yamara 17:04, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Discussion
Hi, my userid is paustin and I am the one who created this article. I created it before getting the userid. I'll be learning more about wikipedia style soon and joining the community in earnest.
[edit] Passive Voice
Please rewrite the fragment "...is most notably known..." from the first paragraph to specify how he is known, who recognizes him as such and cite a source. TheRingess 07:02, 22 December 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Passive construction still remains
But I qualified by whom he is recognmized. I think citing sources (reviews of his work) is a bit much to add since it's all dust-jacket quotes or in articles that I can't find the original source for. paustin

