Talk:Landmannalaugar

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[edit] Tone

This is written in the style of a travel guide mixed with advertising. It needs some clean-up to make it more encyclopaedic. --JBellis 17:54, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

I agree with JBellis, and believe the comment on tone is correct. Yet as a simple reader, and visitor to Iceland, the article seems essentially factual, very interesting, and even possibly useful. Language such as "more colors that you can count" and one or two other phrases do indeed sound a little silly...Personally I'm not keen on pony riding. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.98.115.3 (talk) 04:40, 1 October 2007 (UTC)