Talk:Kit Malthouse
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The following examples appear to indicate a non NPOV attitude - with suggestions to improve.
"...police efforts to tackle prostitution in Britain were raised after Mr Malthouse began his campaign." Evidence/references required.
re telephone booths "...that even children use." Avoid sensationalist comment - if it is a quote then make it obvious.
"Vodafone... refused to co-operate."' If this cannot be referenced then it better be removed before Wikipedia gets into trouble. and "...pimps and prostitution gangs moved their business to Vodafone..."' Same as above if not more so.
The general language used, outside of the concerns expressed above, seems to indicate a degree of approval for the efforts of Mr Malthouse in the matter of removing prostitutes/brothels "business cards" from public telephone callboxes. I feel the entire section needs rewriting from a NPOV.
Other matters;
What was the outcome of the challenge to the London Congestion charge? What references/citations for the claim he left Westminster City Council in the best 'financial position for decades'.
LessHeard vanU 21:44, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] My edit
I've removed a lot of stuff from the article (including basically everything referred to in LessHead vanU's comment above). Please use and cite sources in adding anything back in. -- Jonel | Speak 15:12, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
