Talk:Katsuhiko Nakajima
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[edit] GA failed
This article needs some more work to get up to GA quality. It is well-sourced, but the prose needs work and some other issues, as follows:
- Please get rid of that placeholder image, it is quite unsightly.
- There are far too many red links in the article. Consider choosing 2 or 3 that are more likely to become articles soon and remove the rest for now. Or, create stubs for some of them.
Done by Suriel1981 Bmg916SpeakSign 15:47, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
- The opening sentence is worded in such a way that it sounds like Kensuke Sasaki owns Katsuhiko Nakajima, although I'm sure you mean that Sasaki owns the office. Please reword.
- "At just 19 years old, and making his pro debut at 15..." is an awkward phrase, please rewrite.
- Lots of stylistic but grammatically incorrect comma usage in the prose. Please obtain a copyedit for comma usage.
- The "Career" heading is too long and includes the entire body of prose. Break up into subheadings.
Done by Suriel1981
- Remove POV commentary about his age like "just 19 years old" and "the young age of 14".
- The dates mentioned all need to include years so the statements are durable over time.
Thanks! --Mus Musculus (talk) 18:37, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
[edit] GA candidate (2nd nomination)
Just wondering, can this article still pass the above nomination, even without having an image on the page? I don't know too much about what is needed for GA, but i would have thought this was one of the criteria. --SteelersFan UK06 06:14, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- There are no free images available of Nakajima right now; there used to be a copyrighted picture, but it was deleted. Also WP:GA? criterion 6b says "a lack of images does not disqualify an article from Good Article status". --MarcK 07:31, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
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- Brilliant. Well lets keep at it then! --SteelersFan UK06 08:13, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS): 
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR): 
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- It is stable.
- It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
- a (tagged and captioned):
b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA):
c (non-free images have fair use rationales): 
- a (tagged and captioned):
- Overall:
Chaza93
16:51, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
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