Talk:Judgment Day (2007)

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[edit] Pre-GA review

The article is looking good. I did some copyediting, but I wanted to mention a few things here:

  1. In the second paragraph of the "Background" section, I'm confused by this sentence: "Both men escaped the steel cage at the same time therefore Mark Henry made his return and attacked The Undertaker." I'm not sure that I see the link between the two events.
    Y Done.
  2. In the next sentence, a brief explanation of what a Money in the Bank contract is would be helpful to non-wrestling fans.
    Y Done.
  3. In the first paragraph of the "Event" section, why did Carlito fall down?
    Y Done.
  4. In the fourth paragraph of the "Aftermath" section, it would help to explain that Khali's foot being under the rope led to the rematch at One Night Stand. Otherwise, it doesn't make sense to mention the foot in the "Event" and "Results" sections.
    Y Done.

That's all that I can find. I hope this helps, and please get in touch if you have any questions. GaryColemanFan (talk) 20:13, 4 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] GA review

This ones looking pretty good, just a few minor issues.

  • The first paragraph in the event section is a little choppy and vague. Why did Carlito fall down? How/what did Carlito hit Flair with to cause him bleed
    • Y Done. –LAX 00:10, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
  • Should it be mentioned that Michaels was legitimately injured before the event?
    • Y Done. I added that he had a legitimate knee injury coming into the event. –LAX 00:21, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

That's all for now. -- Scorpion0422 23:56, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

Promoted. Good work. -- Scorpion0422 00:26, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Dead links

According to this, a lot of the links in the article have gone dead. I would search WWE.com or get the archived versions from archive.org. Nikki311 00:18, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure I've already fixed all those. –LAX 00:30, 21 May 2008 (UTC)