Talk:Jonathan Idema/Comments

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The pictures need fair use rationales. The fraud trial needs to be in the lead section, because it is mentioned in the section military service before even the fraud allegations are mentioned. The paragraph mentioning his scuba diving is best left out, as these kind of unsubstantiated claims cannot be proven this way. The first paragraph of Afghanistan, mentioning the charges against Idema, is completely unnecessary at this point. This section simply needs to describe his travel to Afghanistan, the charges should go to Arrest trial and sentencing. Errabee 11:07, 20 April 2007 (UTC)