Talk:Jon Coghill

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Good article Jon Coghill has been listed as one of the Arts good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can delist it, or ask for a reassessment.
January 8, 2008 Good article nominee Listed
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[edit] Improvements

As discussed on WT:FING, this article needs lots of work. I've just kind of expanded a bunch, so it's gone from a very small stub end to a top end Start class. Any further improvements you can see fit, be my guest, but please make sure you cite your allegations using citation templates with reliable sources. Thanks. --lincalinca 09:53, 25 December 2007 (UTC)

Nice work - there's certainly a good deal of meat on there now. I know PCentral has a stack of interviews with him lying around - it'll be good to insert some more of his views on stuff. Dihydrogen Monoxide (Review) 22:38, 25 December 2007 (UTC)
Crap, dude, that stuff you've done today is enormous. I definitely took it from a tiny stub to a comfy start, but you've given it an all new dimension. Well played, sir! --lincalinca 17:02, 30 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA nom on hold

Just a few gliches. This is my first review, so I'll do as much as possible.

  • Nambour High School dead wlink, dun dun dun.
    • I'll get to creating this one day.
  • The Fuggees another ↑
    • Same as above :)
  • "Coghill received his first drum at the age of 14;" Is this sourced? If so is it possible to make it more clear. I'm not sure if it is that big of a deal.
    • Done - I doubled up ref 10 so it was clear that it applied to this statement too.

I must say, this is the best review I have ever done. Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 00:44, 8 January 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for this review, and thanks for helping with the GA backlog. Cheers, Dihydrogen Monoxide 06:53, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
Passed. WOO! First review! Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 22:20, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
Thanks :) Dihydrogen Monoxide 22:51, 8 January 2008 (UTC)