Talk:Jim Detwiler
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[edit] GA review
For the time being, I do not feel that the article meets the GA criteria. The text is short, stiff and uncompelling, althought it is extremely well-sourced for such a short article. There are also some vital things missing, such as his birthdate, which, to me, means it isn't comprehensive enough. -- Scorpion0422 20:30, 26 December 2007 (UTC)
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