Talk:Jim Detwiler

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Jim Detwiler was a good article nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

Reviewed version: December 26, 2007

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A fact from Jim Detwiler appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on December 3, 2007.
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[edit] GA review

For the time being, I do not feel that the article meets the GA criteria. The text is short, stiff and uncompelling, althought it is extremely well-sourced for such a short article. There are also some vital things missing, such as his birthdate, which, to me, means it isn't comprehensive enough. -- Scorpion0422 20:30, 26 December 2007 (UTC)