Talk:Jet2.com

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[edit] NPOV

In the history, seems to give a brief history and then another one which isn't neutral. Terms like 'top destinations' are used throughout. (Wynnne (talk) 18:44, 28 November 2007 (UTC))

I have re-written the History section in an attempt to make it factual and neutral, and remove unnecessary statements or information. I will leave the neutrality tag on the page until everyone is happy that this resolves the issue with the article. Please feel free to enhance the section further and leave comments on this page so we can work towards removing the tag. SempreVolando (talk) 14:51, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
Good work SV reads a lot better - I have done a few tweaks. Just a note about the inclusion of Jet2holidays.Com, I suspect that Jet2holidays Limited is part of the Dart Group and not a subsidary of the airline. If this is the case it should be removed or just referenced as a sister company. MilborneOne (talk) 20:36, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
Thanks MO, I have also tweaked the wording for Jet2holidays.com as I think you are right - it is almost certainly a Dart Group company not a subsidiary of Jet2.com. I will leave the neutrality tag on the page for a few more days in case anyone else wishes to comment before removing it. SempreVolando (talk) 14:45, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
Y Done - With no further comments on the neutrality issue concerning this article, I have removed the neutrality tag. SempreVolando (talk) 19:59, 30 December 2007 (UTC)