Talk:Jean-Paul Belmondo/Comments

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The article, though informative, has a couple of writing problems. For example, under the section on Belmondo's personal life, the author begins by stating that Belmondo's father was a famous Sicilian sculptor. The author then goes on to cite various pieces of info about Belmondo, while using the generic "he" pronoun. It's confusing, as the reader doesn't immediately realize we're no longer reading about Belmondo's father. This is easily fixed by simply inserting JP Belmondo's name where appropriate. (It might also be useful to know the father's name.)

There are also not very many footnotes, so we don't know the precise source of Belmondo's box-office success, his move to the stage, or his stroke. LMW67 15:20, 8 February 2007 (UTC)