Talk:J Mays

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No source is listed for his being "instrumental in creating several new production models," which is a rather dubious claim in itself, since as the lead of design, J Mays can be considered to be "instrumental" in the production of quite nearly all vehicles in the Ford lineup, especially those he directly supervises. I make note that no mention is given of his involvement with the low-selling Ford Five Hundred, so it would appear to me that the user who made the edit in question is showing favorable bias to Mr. Mays. The contextual use of the word "creating" comes dangerously close to "designing," which would be quite injurious to British (and Swedish) egos. I'm changing "creating" to "the production of," since it shows less favorable bias to Mr. Mays. --Tvs117 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tvs117 (talk • contribs) 00:34, 30 October 2007 (UTC)