Talk:IP integration

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hi, I need help with this page. Please find sources, data and more information and coordinate with me. I also need help in making this page more wikified. Thanks.

This page is decent, but it needs to read more like an encyclopedia article rather than a promotional brochure. Bloodshedder 04:16, 24 Apr 2005 (UTC)

I liked the changes made by bloodshedder. I also agree that it sounds too much like a brochure but I was hoping that to be a start.