User talk:Huwmanbeing/Sandbox1

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This article is my attempt at overhauling the BattleTech technology article. Let me know what you think! If I get it in the proper shape and get consensus from the other editors, I plan to replace the existing page with this one. Huwmanbeing ★ 18:36, 23 November 2007 (UTC)

This is amazing. There are some minor grammar issues, but those are trivial. I applaud what you have done to make this article more easily accessible to non BTech-ers, especially with the more generalized overview (something that I think necessitated a complete rewrite to acheive). --Scaletail (talk) 00:23, 25 November 2007 (UTC)

Thanks! There's definitely still work to be done on it, but I'm glad to know it's in the right ballpark. I'll wait a while longer for others to comment, but if there's nothing major I'll probably move it over soon and open it up for everyone to make their changes/additions/etc. Huwmanbeing ★ 15:42, 26 November 2007 (UTC)