Talk:Hoshin Roshi Ryu

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This article currently reads - especially the last line - like an advertisement, not an encyclopedia article. I've tagged it NPOV, but that's only scratching the surface. I know nothing of this style or what sources might be available, so I leave that to others. Cavaliercoon 23:42, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

It represents one groups interpretation of the developement of a martial art found by Glenn Morris. A second group that broke off due to Hessie's claiming headship can also be found here under hoshin budo ryu. An large group of unaffiliated students who accept neither of those groups as valid successors is also out there. This reads as if it is taken directly from the official webite as an adverisment. Technogypsy1 20:56, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

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BetacommandBot (talk) 06:49, 26 February 2008 (UTC)