Talk:Hitomi Takahashi (singer)

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This article reads like a favorable review (there are a lot of "fannish" comments and wording choices all throughout the article). Please see Wikipedia:Guide to writing better articles for tips on making the article into a more encyclopedic article. ···日本穣^{? · Talk to Nihonjoe} 17:50, 13 January 2007 (UTC)

Thank you for pointing this out to me! I have edited the article to make it less "fannish" than it was before, but if it still sounds that way, then please point this out to me so I can do my best to promptly change it. Shinigami Niko 04:52, 22 January 2007 (UTC)