Talk:Henri Brocard

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[edit] Meteorology?

Why the fixation with Brocard NOT having made significant original discoveries in meteorology? Seems that that would be true of most meteorologists and he certainly did make contributions to geometry. 04:48, 1 January 2008 (UTC)Tom

What fixation? It's mentioned only twice. It's an interesting fact, which I suppose is why it was featured on DYK. (I wouldn't know, I don't nominate it) Nousernameslefttalk and matrix? 18:33, 1 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Successful good article nomination

I am glad to report that this article nomination for good article status has been promoted. This is how the article, as of January 31, 2008, compares against the six good article criteria:

1. Well written?: Yes
2. Factually accurate?: Yes
3. Broad in coverage?: Yes
4. Neutral point of view?: Yes
5. Article stability? Yes
6. Images?: Yes

Nicely done. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to Good article reassessment. Thank you to all of the editors who worked hard to bring it to this status, and congratulations.— Avi (talk) 16:39, 31 January 2008 (UTC)

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