Talk:Headquarters Joint Operations Command (Australia)

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[edit] Intro needs simple definition

The intro needs to be simplified. First sentence should be a description that tells a reader from another country what it is and where it is, without over reliance on jargon or acronyms. Lester 21:27, 5 April 2008 (UTC)