Talk:Hamilton H. Howze

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Nice work on the infobox. Unfortunately, the content of the article needs some reformatting. The first few sentences of an article should not be about when or where the subject was born, about his parents or childhood. They should be a summary of the key points of the rest of the article. Who was Hamilton Howze? Which battles or wars did he fight in, in which branch of the military (or more specific), what rank, and most importantly why is he significant? Having done that, you can start your second paragraph with his birth, his parents and childhood and like that. Thank you. LordAmeth 14:17, 5 February 2007 (UTC)