Talk:Grotesque body
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[edit] Tidy up/ Confusing
One user found this confusing. I have to say this is or hopefully was pretty heavy stuff. I reworded some things, wikilinked some unclear terms and fixed referencing. The intangential concept was also somewhat explained in a similarly complex manner making comprehension of the literary node an intraversible task. Exactly. I think most users reading this be familiar with literature but i've used less taxing terms now. I for one hate dumbing down but i think the people who wrote the original have somehow accomplished the task of "smarting up". Hopefully it's a little clearer now. Sillyfolkboy (talk) 01:53, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

