Talk:Green Valley Lake, California

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Well, I'm sorry it's so bad. I wrote it, and I'm only 13. If you can write a better one, fine. Do so. But I bet you don't have a vacation home or live there, not do you? I'm going up there next week, I'll see if I can fix it after I get some more information on the town up there. And I know that it's not so formal, but if you need to know about green valley lake, I think it will help you a bit. I will try to improve it the best I can. I only have a "B-" in 8th grade english, so cut me some slack. It should also be bumped up to mid-importance, I mean it is The highest town on the mountain range. It should also be under "start". It is in some kind of form, although it does need much improvement.

                  -blakerobinson2u

Dont be discouraged by the banners someone placed on the article, Blake. Like most articles on wikipedia, this one simply needs more work. Thank you for your contributions to date. Try to find some references to substantiate and build the article. Local newspaper articles and internet sources are probably your best bet. Let me know if there is anything i can do to assist you. I have now added the first reference and set up a references section. I have also started some copy editing to add to the formal tone. You can do some more of that. Anlace 03:54, 6 April 2007 (UTC)