Talk:Grayson Murphy

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[edit] Second Paragraph

I have attempted to make the second para "read" more easily. I do not, however, know anything about the subject and am not even familiar with turn of the 20th Century American history so the paragraph probably needs checking over, correcting and expanding by someone who knows what they are writing about. LessHeard vanU 21:07, 30 March 2007 (UTC)