Talk:GP32
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[edit] Issues
There are two issues with this page:
- It sounds like an advertisement. In fact, it sounds almost exactly like the official GP32 page. Sections like "An Intelligent Operating System" are extremely POV.
- It's very poorly written. The article is full of incomplete sentences, informal language usage, etc. In fact, it contains many of the same grammatical errors as the official GP32 page, suggesting that they were written by the same person, and further bolstering the POV status of the page. --capnmidnight 17:29, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Copied From...my bad.
For what this article is, most of the content was copied from an article I edited. Why? It was actually transfered. This is why the article may appear dirty.
I'll do the neccessary corrections.
The parts that were copied are also old stuff I wrote and at the time I maybe wasn't as good in English. I'm natively french so many of the sentences are reflected from direct translation.
For the almost like the gamepark website thing, as if it was POV, its also my fault. I'm working in Marketing and I'm used to write about products as if it was somekind of super positive success. I'll nutralize the article and ask for further correction for parts that are directly translated from French.
[edit] Already edited
Many people already edited the article. Maybe some minor clean up and organization to do in it, but anyways thanks everyone for the corrections. :)
[edit] Some idiot vandalised the page
Near the bottom in "specifications," it say that the system "also sucks bit fat donkey cocks." —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 72.24.119.228 (talk) 05:17, 19 February 2007 (UTC).
[edit] Ram upgradeable changed to upgradeable using mod
This is because the term upgrade is misleading. It was never meant to be upgraded, and according to the link some amount of technical knowledge is needed to perform the upgrade, including modifications to the BIOS, perhaps someone can change the wording.
