Talk:Gerald Ratner

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[edit] Citations

Using the standard citation templates would be helpful - WP:CIT -- John (Daytona2 · talk) 17:56, 6 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Conversational Tone

"After Signet" and "Personal life" sound quite conversational, as if written by Ratner himself or a friend. [Nitpick mode on] this needs to be rewritten. [/nitpick mode] —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.147.42.161 (talk) 22:32, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

I can't see anything wrong with a conversational tone, except to people who want to sound encyclopedic —Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.177.114.0 (talk) 15:51, 19 March 2008 (UTC)