Talk:GB-PVR

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[edit] This article or section is written like an advertisement

The page has been marked as an advert. I do agree with that editor we should avoid advertisements by all means. I know this page has been written by end users. I think they have at best tried to make an objective description to make it comparable with e.g. Media Centre and MythTV. The only possibly non-objective statements I can see are in the adjectives like easy. More explicit referrals to what the editor sees as advertising statements would be helpful.
--Pz3 13:43, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

Well, this change turned a stub article into something that looks perfectly like a “Features” page on a program's website. Well, some of the added content seems to have been taken from GB-PVR's page.
This one has made it better, but the article still contains “fully featured”, “large user base” (without any numbers), “you” and "your" (Not sure, but I think those words don't have place in such an article. At least not all over it.)…
Also, anonymous IPs have removed the Advert template twice.
--AVRS 21:18, 10 September 2007 (UTC)