Talk:FutureSex/LoveSounds/GA1

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[edit] GA Review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    The lead sorta summarizes the article, but not entirely and it would be best to expand it a little more.
I think its complete?Any more topic to touch on the lead? --Efe (talk) 10:30, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Yup, it summarizes the article. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:48, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
  1. B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    In the Background section, a source is needed for the Justified hits.
I change the first sentence to "Timberlake released his debut album, Justified, in 2002, and spawned the US top five hit "Rock Your Body"." I thin it does not need source. Its factual and is not contentious. Senorita was not a hit, sorry, so I removed it.
Yeah, I was having a hard time with "Señorita" being a major hit, but its fine now. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:48, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
A source is needed for both these sentences ---> "Since Justified, Timberlake wanted to be recognized as an R&B artist because it is the kind of music he grew listening to" and "When his debut album was released, reviews were positive about it, however, most of them were under the pop album category", in the Music and lyrics section.
The source of these lines are supported by the citation of this line: "Timberlake reflects, "OK, well I'm not an R&B artist, I'm a pop artist, so I'm just going to go wherever I want to go."[9]" --Efe (talk) 10:38, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Oh, thanks for catching me on that, I was wondering if not that was the source to them. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:48, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
A source is needed for the release date of the album.
Sourced. --Efe (talk) 10:38, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Cool. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:48, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Is there a source for the Beyoncé and 50 Cent collaborating in the deluxe version of the album?
The tracklisting itself is the source. --Efe (talk) 10:38, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Awesome. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:48, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
It would be best to add the DVD as source to the last paragraph from the Release and reception section.
Which exactly? --Efe (talk) 10:38, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
See Triple H#cite note-KOK-53 as an example. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:48, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
If this is also part of the DVD ---> "Guests were American artists Three 6 Mafia, T.I., Snoop Dogg, and the album's producers will.i.am and Timbaland", it would be best to add it as a source. If not, a source is needed for that.
  1. C. No original research:
  2. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  3. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  4. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  5. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  6. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article! Also, contact me if the above statements are answered.

--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:17, 31 May 2008 (UTC)

Well, after reading the article, I have gone off and passed the article. Congratulations. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a GA review. Thank you to all who worked hard to bring it to this status, and congratulations. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 18:20, 3 June 2008 (UTC)