Talk:Fredia Gibbs

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[edit] Neutral Point of View

As this article stands, it does not conform to the Wikipedia guidelines on Neutral Point of View. Words and phrases like "stellar" and "mean looking kick and an incredibly toned body" are not encyclopedic. Much of this seems to be autobiography, which can be problematic. A review of the Neutral Point of View tutorial might be helpful. --Moonriddengirl 16:07, 31 July 2007 (UTC)

These have been remedied, so the tag has been removed. --Creashin 03:38, 1 August 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Autobiographical?

Multiple editions have been made which appear to suggest that the subject herself maybe writing the article as the additions are written from a first person point of view. While this is not vandalism, I do have concern that it is non-verifiable and may not represent a NPOV. I have therefore reverted to last version by Creashin. I will appreciate others' comments if they think I have been too harsh. --Nuttycoconut 04:20, 12 August 2007 (UTC)