Talk:Frank De Vol
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Cheers - for the sake of clarity I made a small edit in the section “Private Life” - should consider merging that with the following sub-section “Later Life.” - RS.
I don't see how RS' changes add anything in terms of clarity. More like "for the sake of pedantry"! It's not particularly well-written pedantry either, with respect, but, to avoid similar charges, I won't change it back, apart from the comma RS added before "and", which is a grammatical howler. At least no-one took up RS' suggestion of merging this section with the one on "Later Life", which would have been an odd reading of a reference to something stretching back to the 1930s!! - Gervius
