Talk:Findhorn Ecovillage
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[edit] Opening Paragaph
I am not happy with the passage that reads "...especially regarding the spiritual origins of the community..."
It is not clear if this is being cited in the footnotes and it is not picked up on later in the main body. If it is important enough for an introduction it must be worth expanding upon? --Lord Matt (talk) 17:40, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
- This is expanded on under Awards, UN Connections and Critiques: "Various critiques exist in print[34][35] although these tend to concentrate on the eclectic spirituality...." Ben MacDuiTalk/Walk 07:50, 5 June 2008 (UTC)

