Talk:Feline Hepatic Lipidosis

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[edit] Onset is not a verb

I'm not too happy with the phrase "the disease has officially onset." For one, onset is not a verb. Second, what does the author mean by "officially"? Who sanctions the onset of the disease to make it official? I'd change it, but I know too little about the disease to be able to correct the sentence and still make it make sense. Thanks. 85.178.51.102 (talk) 21:09, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Made it more clear by saying it is the stage at which a diagnosis can be made, such as from a liver biopsy.SabarCont 08:10, 24 February 2008 (UTC)