Talk:Family Kingdom Amusement Park

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I will rewrite, but it is the only park in myrtle beach and only giving a short listing of the rides and what it has available. I don't mean to sound like I am advertising and I did not leave phone numbers or the address for the place. What do you want to see in this article the one before it was about to be deleted?--Patfulk 20:48, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

It's not written as if it's an objective, encyclopaedic article. It sounds as if the writer has a vested, opinionated view. Wikipedia:Guide to writing better articles could be of help here. Good luck fixing the article. Alcemáe ^{T • C} 20:55, 30 May 2007 (UTC)