Talk:Duncan McNabb

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Now, while this is a very thorough input on the life and times of one Duncan McNabb, I am left with a question regarding the presentation...that being: who wrote this, his mother?

I lack the rhetoric to clearly define my problem with this article, so forgive my blunt writing. From the "Humanitarian" edicts of his job description to the listing of various correspondance courses he has taken for part of his education process this smacks of biasness. Not directly, but in the sense that this is directly copied from a PR booklet or as I stated, his mother wrote it. this article borders on agenda advertisement.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by Fortidude (talk • contribs) 19:05, 8 August 2006.

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Talk:Duncan McNabb

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