Talk:Detonation (band)

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[edit] Article needs major cleanup

  • The lead section alone contains sentences that don't make sense.
  • The entire History section was copied and pasted from the source cited.- The entire history section needs to be deleted and rewritten from scratch.
  • The discography section looks more like a track listing section, and is not properly formatted.
  • The entire article is just very unpleasant to the eyes, especially to people who don't know much about the band.

The article actually even fails to mention why the band is notable but I'm hoping someone who knows the band well will fix the problems.--Leon Sword 01:41, 5 April 2007 (UTC)