Talk:Desktop On Demand

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[edit] Too Commercial

I've made some changes to the page to reflect corresponding changes to the DoD service. When writing the updates (and the original page, in fact), I've tried to keep the text as impartial as I can. However, I do work for Desktop On Demand, and so I have to concede that some sections of the article may be biased, even if I can't see it myself. I'd be happy to make changes to the article as required, but it may be better for other, more impartial people to make textual changes - that's the benefit of Wikipedia, after all! Dolph 13:05, 17 April 2008 (UTC)