Talk:Delphine Arnault

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More information about this article... The following comments have been left for this page: The article is a joke. Just a praise for the daughter of the CEO, and does not even refer to this fact. It makes it look like the fact that she's the daughter accounts for nothing to her unequaled VP position at 29. Looks like a biography in communist soviets. Plus, it's inaccurate. She was not one of the wealthiest women in France in 2004; the wealth mentioned is the one of her father, not hers. (edit)

This appears to the the direct result of an article written in French run through babelfish or some other translation application. As such, the wording is quite awkward. Jasmol 01:41, 12 November 2005 (UTC)

[edit] I cleaned it up a bit.

I've cleaned up the English a tad bit under about her wedding. It is not as polished as it could be, but I was not 100% sure what they were trying to say. I mainly just deleted extranneous "the"'s and whatnot, and changed some of the weird direct translations into how you use them in English (for example - was given appointment means was invited).

[edit] Delphine Arnault Illustrator

I don't think the links to the illustrations by Delphine Arnault are by the person that is the subject of this page. See, e.g. http://delphinearnault.com/commissions.html.