Talk:Dawn Marie Psaltis
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[edit] Finishing and Signature Moves
I replaced three signatire finishing moves that had been removed by an IP user who also added the work slap to the article randomly. Therefore, I was skeptical of their removal. If they needed to be removed for legit reason, please do so. I would appreciate it. Thanks. -- Psy guy (talk) 13:48, 13 October 2005 (UTC)
[edit] No Rumors?
No Rumors? Certainly it bears mentioning, as it was reported by several credible sources, rumors or not.
- Credible sources which you failed to cite. Moreover, news websites are not reliable sources where potentially libellous rumours are concerned. Wikipedia deals in verifiable fact, not gossip and speculation. McPhail 14:44, 24 June 2006 (UTC)
- Ok fine, but it still deserves mention, even if you can't drop names. I re-wrote it to be more vague.
[edit] Incorrect Link
The link to Al Wilson leads to the NFL Linebacker, with no mention of the wrestling angle whatsoever. I removed the wiki link from his name for the time being. Genocidal 08:38, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
how did she get the name Beulah Mcgillslutty anyways?
Ok someone put on this page that she died. I dont know if its a joke or real but if she really is dead, then we need proof.
[edit] Dawn Marie Wilson
I have correct where it said Dawn MArie-Wilson to Dawn Marie Wilson. There would be no hyphen, as Marie is not her last name, but part of her first. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Xxbulldogxx (talk • contribs) 21:50, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Dawn vs Torrie.jpg
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[edit] Moves
Should a headbutt to the mid-section be added to her moves list as she done this quite alot throughout 2002. Lee 18 January 2008, 11:07 (UTC)
[edit] Pre-GA Review
Ok I haven't done this in a long time, but I am noticing a few things with the article :) Overall its really good, just some minor tweakage is needed.
- This is very trivial and doesn't apply just to this article but while I'm here... It would be nice to be able to link to where sports entertainment is mentioned in the lead. However, that article is hardly even a stub right now, has no references, and would detract from any article it was linked to in its current state. I'll try to bring this up at WP:PW in the near future, because that article would be an asset to the project.
Early Life section
- 1st paragraph
- The first two sentences are a bit short/choppy. Could they be combined?
- Four out of the Five sentences here only refer to Psaltis as "she" so lets try to mix it up and alternate the terms.
- 3rd paragraph
- Five out of the seven sentences here only refer to Psaltis as "she" so lets try to mix it up and alternate the terms.
Professional wrestling career
- 1st paragraph
- Lets start off this section by immediately mentioning her name instead of "she". It won't sound as awkward here after the first section has been altered as mentioned above. At least I don't think it will. It is just best to introduce new sections with the actual name whenever possible.
- Who is Jeff Jones? If his name is mentioned, there needs to be some info given about him if we can't link to an article about him.
- World Wrestling Entertainment section
- 2nd paragraph
- Despite this, as part of the storyline, she developed feelings for Al and the two got married on an episode of SmackDown! in the underwear. I think "the underwear" should read "their underwear."
- 3rd paragraph
- (1st sentence) Psaltis later began a feud with Wilson for the second time. might read slightly better asLater, Psaltis began a second feud with Wilson.
- (4th sentence) After being on hiatus from SmackDown! programming, she began a new storyline with Miss Jackie, involving whether she and Jackie's fiancée Charlie Haas had an affair - should there be commas around Charlie Haas' name?
- 2nd paragraph
There might be some more nitpicking I can do, but I'd like to see these changes implemented if possible first, because the others might be non issues if the rest is altered. Great work! --Naha|(talk) 15:55, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
I also looked over the article. It's looking good, but I wanted to mention a few things as well:
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- In the second paragraph of the "World Wrestling Entertainment" section, the word "storyline" is used three times. Could the second mention be changed to "Despite this, as part of the angle, she developed feelings for Al..."?
- Just to clarify, Hardcore Homecoming: November Reign is not officially affiliated with WWE/ECW, correct?
- For the "Personal life" section, do we know her husband's last name? I know that sort of information is sometimes impossible to find, but I thought it was worth asking about.
- That's all I could find. I made a few minor changes for clarification, but the article is well done. GaryColemanFan (talk) 17:24, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
[edit] GA review
After going through the article I feel that it meets the GA criteria and I have decided to pass it. I have fixed up spelling errors and redirects as I read through it. The only way I feel this article could be better was if it contained more current information on Psaltis and also if her ring name in the infobox should still be in boldface, because bold should only be used if the person is still wrestling. If she is, perhaps include some information about that but if not then the name should not be in boldface. Anyway, congratulations to everyone who helped turn this into a good article. - Deep Shadow 00:12, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review and cleaning up the spelling and redirects. Currently, Psaltis is only doing a few shows here and there. From what I read about her, she is still trying to lose the baby weight, and then she is going to hopefully begin training/wrestling again. Since she is not wrestling on a regular basis, I unbolded the ring names. Nikki311 19:01, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
