Talk:Crossloop

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Hey I see that you've marked the page written by as advertisement. Could you tell me that where exactly it can be improved and what can be done to fix this issue.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Gmayank (talk • contribs) 02:17, 23 May 2008

The phrase that stuck out most was, "however, unlike it's competitors," but the remainder of the article also has a bit of a tone to it. I'm not exactly a good writer/editor (which is the reason I didn't fix it myself) so all I can do is recommend reading those links in the advert template. (WP:NPOV and WP:SOAP) --DBN (talk) 09:32, 23 May 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for letting me know. I've removed that particular phrase however I'll work on the article again to ensure that it doesn't sound like advertisement. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Gmayank (talk • contribs) 17:12, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Is it better now ? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Gmayank (talk • contribs) 10:44, 3 June 2008 (UTC)