Talk:Cornerstone Church of Ames

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[edit] Invitation for Feedback from Experienced Wiki Users

Since posting this article on Wikipedia was my first attempt at creating a Wikipedia article, I would appreciate any advice or feedback from experienced Wiki users providing me with suggestions to improve my article, etc. Thanks! Darcy4063 (talk) 03:13, 21 April 2008 (UTC)Darcy4063

I don't have much experience with writing pages for churches or for organizations in general. But here are a few suggestions - what is particularly notable about Cornerstone? How does its college ministry's size compare to similar ministry programs at ISU? At other Regent Universities? How does the church size compare to other churches in Ames? in the state? What denomination(s) is the church affiliated with?

Also, add Template:Infobox church to the article, and a picture of the church, if a copyright-free or GDFL'ed photograph is a available. --Philosopher ^{Let us reason together.} 20:24, 21 April 2008 (UTC)

Also, service times are probably unnecessary in the article - I am removing them for now. I don't know if there's a guideline covering them, but that information seems more like "directory" information than "encyclopedia" information. --Philosopher ^{Let us reason together.} 20:30, 21 April 2008 (UTC)

I appreciate your feedback, and I have made some changes that you recommended. I understand your reasoning for deleting the Weekend Services section and am glad you forewarned me before deleting this. Thanks for your input! Darcy4063 (talk) 20:19, 29 April 2008 (UTC)Darcy4063

Glad I could help! If you need any more help, let me know - also, since I'll be in the area, I'll see if I can take a picture of Cornerstone in the next couple of weeks for the article. (I'll have to borrow my parents camera first, but...) --Philosopher ^{Let us reason together.} 16:56, 30 April 2008 (UTC)