Talk:Concord, Massachusetts
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Concord,Massachusetts- 2nd battle of the American revolution.73 British Killed 200 wounded or missing. U.S victory
[edit] Removed "Unsourced" tag
The history section was recently tagged for lacking sources. Over the last week or so, I have added a substantial number of sources to this section, in addition to adding more material. I removed the tag today because I feel it is no longer necessary. Thanks to Dalmatian Mommy for appropriately tagging this section, which motivated me to source the article! Venicemenace 18:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Is there a better way to say this?
This article starts out with, "Although a small town, Concord is noted for its leading roles in American history and literature. The Massachusetts Correctional Institution at Concord (MCI-CONCORD), a level 4 medium security state prison, is located in Concord."
Surely, if the prison must be mentioned, there is a place to do so than in such a prominent spot in the article, and right after noting the town's roles in history and literature! Surely there are other prominent locations within the town that could be mentioned here! Jimtrue (talk) 18:53, 29 November 2007 (UTC)

