Talk:Chichester/Comments

The introduction should be a 2-4 paragraph summary of the article
The "Unusual Franchise" section should be part of "History"
Do we need two pictures of the same thing?
"City" is a rather vague heading for an article about a city. What is the criteria for inclusion in that section? Consider using the suggested sections in the WikiProject link above. The Festivals and Music paragraphs could be the start of a "Culture" section, the architecture could be an "Architecture" section, either top-level or within the culture section. The Cathedral and conservation sections could be included within Architecture, or remain separate if all three sections can be expanded enough.
Education: use prose not lists.
Transport: as above, also, do not start a new subsection for every sentence -- remove those sub-headers.
Unless the transport and areas sections can be expanded it might be best to merge them under a "Geography" header, which could include setting, landscape, geology, ecology and climate.
Cite sources using Wikipedia:Footnotes

Comments by Steinsky at 15:16, 6 September 2006.